1) Does it make sense?
2) What is the filmmaker's intention as far as you can tell?
3) How is the "flow" for a) content and b) editing?
4) How does it make you feel?
Tell the filmmaker what is going well and what needs clarifying or enhancing. Suggest edits, ask questions, comment on the feeling you are left with at the end. At least 1/2 page double spaced for each letter. Bring digital or paper copies with you on Thursday to class.
Group 4: Bradley , Brianna , Nicholas , Jordin , Chloe
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ReplyDeleteyour link is not working!
DeleteThis is my documentary rough draft. I have been really sick and unable to add more to it but I will finish it this weekend. http://asueng102fowlerspring2014.blogspot.com/2014/04/documentary-rough-draft_15.html
ReplyDeletehttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kJM8ctcfPhg
ReplyDeleteenjoy my non edited documentary, i am not very good at editing so theres not much to look at
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_Lg6f2wLl8A
ReplyDeleteIt took me forever to figure out how to upload this rough draft, but here it is. It's basically just pieced together, no editing, and I've yet to finish filming. So it's really really basic, bare with me.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AsFyI9cV8B4
ReplyDeleteSorry the last one didn't work, this one should work.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fSurnX04jvA
ReplyDeleteSorry I know its super late I didn't read the directions right and I thought we were just supposed to look everyone up! My bad!