1) Does it make sense?
2) What is the filmmaker's intention as far as you can tell?
3) How is the "flow" for a) content and b) editing?
4) How does it make you feel?
Tell the filmmaker what is going well and what needs clarifying or enhancing. Suggest edits, ask questions, comment on the feeling you are left with at the end. At least 1/2 page double spaced for each letter. Bring digital or paper copies with you on Thursday to class.
Group 3: Ryan , Warsame , Kara , Andrew ,
Destiny
http://youtu.be/uHEoliBPKCU
ReplyDeletehttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uHEoliBPKCU
This is the link to my documentary so far; I still have to add a voice over and music.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZdgfrdWtpyE
ReplyDeletethis is mine, but due to some recent unexpected events...i was going to add more...but was unable to do so.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E9s_Z9VKmhg
ReplyDeleteHere's my rough draft, the editing is pretty sloppy since Ive never really done it before
Sooo mine refuses to upload anywhere... Can I try to send it to your guy's emails? Or else, I don't really care if you guys look over it. Courtney has already seen it and it's basically finished. LET ME KNOW(:
ReplyDeletehttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ArPFUIw8ts8
DeleteACTUALLY..... try this. IT may have worked now
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z1piXOl-pRs&feature=youtube_gdata
ReplyDeletehere is my rough draft, i posted it on my rough draft post, sorry