Jahi
McMath is a 13-year-old girl who was admitted to the hospital for a routine
tonsillectomy. After she had awoken from the surgery she started bleeding,
seizing, and went into a coma. After 3 days of this, doctors concluded that
Jahi was officially brain dead and therefore, should be taken off of life
support. The parents, not wanting to let go of their daughter, took the
situation to court where the judge ultimately decided to let Jahi be kept on
life support for an extra week, giving the family time to file a petition.
Ranging from family members to doctors to end of life experts, there were
varying opinions of why Jahi should or should not be kept on the machines that
keep her blood pumping.
The first and most obvious
stakeholder that can be identified in this situation is the parents and family
members of Jahi McMath. Even after test have concluded that their loved one is
legally brain dead, the family still firmly believe that their daughter is
“alive”. They see her heart beating as a sign of life even though the machines
are held responsible. They also have seen and felt the twitching of Jahi’s
muscles which they claim is yet another sign of definite life. They fail to
acknowledge that this is merely a muscle spasm and that nothing is truly going
on inside of this little girl. To them, Jahi is still clearly alive and they
don’t understand why someone who is alive and trying to recover should be taken
off of life support.
The attorney of the family also
believes that Jahi should be kept on life support, but for much different
reasons that the family themselves. The attorney does not seem to openly state
that he is fighting for this issue because he believes that Jahi has a chance
at recovering, however, he states “I am fighting
for the right of parents to direct the health care of their child and for them
to make the choice.” This is a very interesting point of view because he seems
to genuinely care about the well being of the family. The family will be at
peace with whatever decision feels right to them. If the state ends up taking
the girl off of life support and the family does not agree, they will most
likely always be unhappy with the outcome.
The power of
prayer is also another stakeholder that can be seen in this article. The family
continually states that they want to public to pray for their daughters’
recovery. They also state that they strongly believe that God will heal their
little girl and she will someday wake up and be fine. This claim seems to give
the family of Jahi a secure sense of false hope. They do not seem to grasp the
concept of brain death because if they did, they would understand that it is
not scientifically or medically possible that any circumstance could change the
outcome of their loved one.
I found there
to be two main stakeholders that are against keeping Jahi on life support.
Their claims and reasoning behind such claims seem to be similar although their
backgrounds are much different. The first is the doctors that were directly
treating Jahi’s case. They preformed the neurological tests that prove that she
is definitely brain dead. Once they presented this tough information to the
family, they were asked to go against protocol and preform the test again.
After multiple more tests all concluding the same outcome, the doctors believe
that the only next step is to take Jahi off of life support. The doctors know
from history and years of experience that there has never once been a case
where a brain dead person has recovered. Since tests have proved the finality
of her brain death, the only logical conclusion is to remove such unnecessary
measurements to keep a dead person alive.
End of life
experts have the same thinking and knowledge of these doctors without the
background of being an actual doctor. Their whole professions revolve around
what the end of a life actually means. To avoid any question between being in a
come and being brain dead they state “no one has ever recovered from brain death, as it's not a coma
or vegetative state.” They
know from their studies that “brain death is just as final as cardiac death.”
When a person’s heart stops beating, the finality of this death is not usually
in question. Brain death is the same thing but in a different part of the body
so it should be treated in the same manner. These are the assumptions that end
of life experts work off of and what they have determined in the case of this
young girl. She is dead; whether is be because of cardiac failure or brain
death, the outcome is the same. Therefore, it is only logical to take a dead
person off of life support.
I think Mikaelah did a very good job of exemplifying the stakeholders and putting it into a rough draft. I could easily depict who the stakeholder is and wether they are for or against the life of Jahi. This story is one that grabbed my attention very well. The fact that a little child could have signs of life is huge when it comes to keeping her on life support. Mikaelah also provided very good examples to back up each stakeholders view on Jahi. Each stakeholder has a huge impact on every situation in life. I believe prayer is a huge one because faith in God is what gives families signs of life to keep hope alive. Overall, well done and well organized.
ReplyDeleteMikaelah did a very good job integrating the stakeholders role into her rough draft. It was easy to follow and the paragraphs flow nicely together. I can easily tell which stakeholders held which position on the case and there was a lot of good information. Each stakeholder had information on why they held the views that they do. Good job so far!
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you incorporated your stakeholders into your rough draft! I think you should open with a catchier introduction sentence but other than that you are off to a great start. Keep adding in logos to support your stance because it is already an emotional topic and you really need hard facts to support it. Like I said you are off to a great start and I really like your rough draft.
ReplyDeleteThis rough draft is very clear and it is very easy to see which stakeholders hold which viewpoints. I also like how you went into detail when explaining why each stakeholder held the view that they did. This rough draft was well organized and extremely easy to follow which makes it that much better. this is a great start!
ReplyDeleteThe draft is very concise and well written. Great job emphasizing important points and making the essay one to model after- I have no further comments on corrections that need to be made.
ReplyDeleteThis draft is very well composed and touches on all the key aspects of the purpose of the paper. Everything is laid out in an easy to follow fashion and gets elaborated on in an effective manner. Great detail pertaining to describing the stakeholders. Excellent draft.
ReplyDeleteI really like this draft because it has a strong tone to it already before even being completely done. What i like is the amount of stakeholders and how they are completely different from one another. Just a few tweaks and this will be a really solid essay.
ReplyDeleteThis draft is put together very well. The first paragraph nicely binds up all of the general composition of the article, and presents its purpose, and also states that there are multiple opinions on the controversial matter. There are also two major stakeholders, which provides two good concrete arguments about the matter. By presenting these two broad points, it allows the reader to find a side to relate themselves with, and does not clutter the reader with an excess of information.
ReplyDeleteThis draft is well written with many valid points. You displayed enough details to support each stakeholder which was a plus. You are pretty much close to being done only a few more touch ups and you're good.
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