Tuesday, February 18, 2014

WP1 Rough Draft

      Reality television can be a deceiving thing. Viewers of reality TV shows such as Here Comes Honey Boo Boo or The Real World watch them simply because they want to know how these peoples’ crazy lives work. Who wouldn’t want to watch a loud family of rednecks living in Georgia or a group of young adults drunkenly fight with one another in an expensive resort style house? The truth of it is, there isn’t much truth behind reality television at all. The producers of these shows tend to have much more control than some like, causing controversy amongst the viewers as well as the cast members themselves. The main stakeholders that are involved in this issue would be the producers, the viewers, and the cast members. Each one of these groups of people is affected by this idea that there’s really too much scripted text behind a reality television show. 
      Those who consider the producers to have too much power in their hands all tend to make at least one solid argument; rigging the outcome of a reality television show is manipulative and unfair. The cast members as well as the audience of the show are both directly affected by this statement. Take the show X Factor, a singing competition show that allows hopeful contestants to sing their way to an expensive recording contract. Every week, the audience votes for who they want to stay on the show and the singer with the least amount of votes is kicked off. Many faithful viewers of the show may like to think that the bright future of their favorite competitor is in their own hands, but that’s not exactly the case. Lorna Simpson, a competitor for the show’s tenth season over in the UK, revealed that the show automatically chooses a winner from the start. Simpson stated after being eliminated from the show, “It’s unfair. X Factor set me up to go out in the first week. They underplayed me… it was set up. They know the outcome of the whole competition. It’s prepared. It’s TV and they have to be ahead.” This goes to show that most competition shows, those including American Idol and The Voice. But singing competition shows aren’t the only ones. On the eighth season of The Bachelorette, Bachelorette Emily Maynard had recently lost her racecar driver fiancé to a plane crash when she was pregnant with his child. Sources state that one of the contestants, Arie Luyendyk Jr., was chosen to last so long in the season because he was a race car driver himself, claiming that the producers wanted that to upset Emily and get her to cry and create some drama on the show. Producers really have no concern with the contestants’ feelings; they just want their shows to get as many views as possible and to please their audience.
      On the other hand, a reality television show wouldn’t receive many views if it the producers never stepped in and forced action. If a reality television show were to film a cast with no interference for a week, the audience would most likely get bored and stop watching the show. Producers are the ones responsible for the story of the show and which way it is supposed to go. David Rupel states that people tend to expect a beginning, middle, and end, and producers have to step and cut footage to create a story if there isn’t one present (Rupel). In most cases, there isn’t a connecting story present in a few days worth of footage, so producers find it necessary to cut the footage in a way that tells a story or creates a problem that the cast now has to deal with. Producers also typically step in and confront the cast members when there’s no action or drama present amongst them, planting seeds in their minds and giving them the idea that something is going on when really, nothing is. But with this method, producers don’t need to be in there long before a full-fledged war breaks out amongst the cast members. Their job is simple; tell someone that their cast mate was giving them a funny look earlier and then step back to watch the sparks turn into a fire. Yet again, the cast members and contestants are the ones that are being affected by this, rather than the audience or the producers.
      When it boils down to the root of a reality television show, producers are in full control. The producers have too much of a say in a show for the show to actually be considered reality, but without that power that they have these shows we see on television today would not have been created or shown.

13 comments:

  1. This is a really good rough draft! It's nicely laid out and seems really complete. I think you're really close to finishing your final draft. It is clear where the stakeholders stand on this issue and I think you hit all of the stakeholders and used a good amount of detail to tell us about their thoughts. Good job and good luck finalizing!

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  2. I think you have a great start to your paper. All the information you gave and different scenarios about the producers held my attention and were worked in well with your paragraphs. I like that you researched and found real life examples to incorporate in your paper. I do think you need a catchier introduction to your paper but you are off to a great start.

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  3. Very well written rough draft. I really love the last two sentences (thesis) in your introduction paragraph. You state each of the three stakeholders and how each one is affecting one another and the society. Also very well structured. This is probably the best draft out of your group to be honest. Brooks also did a good job of backing up her thesis with real life events. I did not even know the "X Factor" chose the winner before the show even started. Just goes to show you what is actually going on behind the scenes with some of the stakeholders and that every reality TV show is out for the people and for the money. Overall, very well written draft and way to show how it is the "producers" who are in control.

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  4. I really enjoyed reading this draft. You did a great job making the opinion very precise and pointing out all sides and details. I think you're pretty far ahead and I really don't have anything to add to this right now other than keep up the good work!

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  5. This rough draft is a great start, you were able to map all the stakeholders and easily portray their thoughts on the matter. It's obvious that you put a good thought and research into this draft. This is definitely a good start to your paper, just try to build into the Ethos, Logos, and Pathos if you can. Overall this looks really good and I think you'll have a really good final draft!

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  6. This is a really great beginning to your paper! You were able to get your point across well and gave both points of view with good examples to go along with it!

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  7. This is a good rough draft. I especially like the intro portion, where you directly relate it to a live example of modern reality TV. This is a good way to immerse the reader into what you are beginning to delve into. It allows them to equate themselves with the content of the writing, and it further extends their understanding as well as their interest with the content that you are writing.

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  8. Your rough draft is really good! I believe a little expansion on some details in your essay and a few more explanations of some things here and there are needed. However you are off to a good start with this paper!

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  9. I like how you don't plainly say stakeholder but present it an essay form and have merge in with the paragraphs. This is a really strong first draft and with a just a few add ons, it will really good.

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  10. This is a great start with everything mapped out in an understandable format. You touched on just about all that was necessary for the essay and that's what's most important. Overall good job.

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  11. This is a great draft that is almost complete. You provided a lot of detail which really helped get your points across. A few more adjustments and you'll be set.

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  12. You did a wonderful job with your first draft. Very well thought out and your points were very clear. Some places need more clarifying but besides that, all was well.

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  13. This is a very good rough draft. I like that it is already in essay form instead of just listing the stakeholders and how to convince them. I thought about doing my draft this way but decided otherwise. You will most likely have a head start on the essay by doing it this way.

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